These Fundraising Appeal Fallacies Will Cost You Money
Ever have a well-meaning, yet perhaps overly controlling or risk-aversive, boss say to you:
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Our fundraising letter must be no longer than one page.
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That’s too simple; we don’t want to talk down to our donors.
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We need to say more about our accomplishments.
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We need to describe numbers of people served; that’s what’s impressive.
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That’s not how I talk.
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That’s not our corporate style.
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That’s not how we do things.
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That’s not what our donors are used to.
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That’s not proper grammar.
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That’s too gushy and effusive.
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I want happy, not sad, photos.
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Asking the reader to “please give generously” is sufficient; no need to name an amount.
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Asking once is enough.
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The development director should sign the letter.
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Signatures from both the E.D. and board president will be more persuasive.
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We don’t need a P.S.
Alas, these are common fundraising appeal fallacies that will cost you money. Money donors might have given to you, if you’d only understood some fundamental fundraising truths.
Truths, Not Fallacies
I was reminded of some of these truths in a post from Jeff Brooks. He spoke of true pearls of wisdom gleaned from his fundraising mentor, the pioneering direct mail writer Bob Screen. We’ve lost Bob and several fundraising giants in recent years, including Simone Joyaux and John Haydon, but we should never lose sight of the wisdom they imparted. It’s the best way to assure their memories live on and their good works continue.
I did not know Bob, but I’m sure I learned from him without realizing it. Because the good stuff gets passed around. Why? Because it works.
And it takes someone with experience to not just demonstrate it works, but to forcefully maintain the necessity of adhering to tested principles, facts and truth. Even – especially – in the face of doubters (e.g. executive directors; board presidents) who would seriously derail your fundraising efforts. With all good intention, of course.
YOU are the fundraiser.
Never forget this is why you were hired. No one is an expert at everything. And chances are fundraising writing is not your leadership’s key area of proficiency. It’s your job to know what works, and what doesn’t.


You must invite your donor into the story.

Did you have a New Year’s resolution to look for a new development position? Or maybe to transition to work in the social benefit sector?


Trust defines the credibility and legitimacy not only of your organization, but of the entire social benefit sector. Yet too few organizations make the effort to operationalize this construct into their fundraising and marketing planning.
Let’s begin with a question: What do you spend more time on? Asking or thanking?


Are you leading with a “gift” or “favor” to positively incline your donor to say “yes?”




Have you ever received confoundingly terrible customer service? Maybe at a restaurant, hotel, fast food restaurant or retail outlet? It happens all the time and, likely, you’ve thought to yourself: “Why on earth are they treating me like this? It’s so stupid! Don’t they realize I’ll never come here again?”
Want your donors to sustain you? Then you can’t consume them in five minutes.
Today a friend, who serves on the board of a struggling local arts organization, asked me what they can do to increase their fundraising. I asked her a few questions; then answered simply: “Have more conversations with people; make more friends.”
Here is some wisdom gleaned from many decades of personal nonprofit work.
Did you ever wonder if there is a foolproof way to communicate with donors?






I never begin writing a fundraising appeal without beginning with a template and checklist. It’s always good to remind yourself of the fundamentals.



What I have for you is something you can do this week (or you can pick another week on your calendar that isn’t already overfilled with appointments, assignments, meetings and what-not). It’s really simple and really powerful. There’s one catch: you have to put aside 45 minutes/day for five days. If you’re resistant to change, read no further. This post isn’t for you. If, however, you have a hunch you might be able to move from good to great, then… read on (oh, and there’s a little bonus ‘gift’ at the end).
If you’re constantly encountering people on your staff or board who want to curtail your fundraising efforts, you’re not alone.





For this year’s appeal, are you shooting from the hip?
People are unpredictable sometimes. They’re also predictable.
What do you spend more time on? Asking or thanking?

I know you’re working on calendar year-end fundraising right now.
The modern model is more like a vortex — an energized circle where everyone is equal. People move in and out as needed, and your job is to keep the energy flowing.
How often have you heard someone say “I hate fundraising; I’ll do anything else,” or something along those lines?
What do you most need to sustain your nonprofit through thick and thin?
Ever have a well-meaning, yet perhaps overly controlling or risk-aversive, boss say to you:
Spring is always a good time for rebirth and dusting away the cobwebs. And what a grave, dusty, cobwebby year it’s been.
Giving is an emotional experience. It deserves an emotional response.